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Friday, December 24, 2010

Mediocre Multitasker, Revisted

More evidence, this time from a blogger published by the Harvard Business Review, that multitasking is essentially a waste of time.   You may feel productive, but the cognitive research insists that your brain is not wired for multiple, simultaneous activities.  If you believe otherwise and decide to keep up your multitasking study habits despite the research, just be aware that you are fooling yourself and consign yourself to the "bottom half." 
It is single-minded focus that makes excellence possible. 

Sunday, December 19, 2010

News from the Food Front

Here are links to stories related to the ongoing national conversation about food.

This one is about a contest to redesign the food pyramid; the winning design was not a pyramid at all, and it incorporates the ideas we just studied.  I really like its simplicity and directness.  The commentary by one of the judges is pretty interesting, too. 

December 20 -- Late Sunday Night, Unanimous Approval:
The Senate just unanimously approved the Food Safety Bill.  Although it doesn't solve all our food problems, it is a start, and we are grateful for that.   Lots of legislation gets pushed through when Congress is anxious to start their winter vacation.  Good stuff passes unnoticed; unfortunately, so does bad stuff.

December 30 -- Food Prices Rise Sharply   Watch what happens as this storyline unfolds.  This article was published on December 17 but it went by on my Twitter Timeline today -- another reason I really like Twitter.  Serendipity happens.

Friday, December 17, 2010

Happy Holidays!


New Years Party Food
Chocolate Chili and Loaded Potato Skins
Enough for 10-12 people — comforting cold weather food

POTATO SKINS can be made in advance, and popped into the oven as your guests start to arrive.   You want to be where the people are, and not slaving away in the kitchen. 

INGREDIENTS

  • 10 baking potatoes
  • 225g strong cheddar or red leicester
  • 250ml sour cream
  • 4 spring onions
  • 1 teaspoon table salt or to taste
  • good grinding of black pepper
  • 1 x 15ml tablespoon worcestershire sauce
  • oil for frying
  • thick sliced bacon

METHOD

   1. The day (or up to 2 days) before you load them, preheat your oven to 400F and bake the potatoes (pricking them first) for about 1½ hours, or until the skins are crisp and the insides fluffy. As soon as you can bear to tackle the hot potatoes, cut them in half lengthways and scoop the insides into a bowl.
   2. Put the husk-like skins of the potatoes on a tray and, when cool, cover until you are ready to fill them. Let the potato cool in the bowl, and then cover until needed.
   3. When you are ready to fill the potatoes, preheat your oven to 400F. Grate the cheese, and add most of it to the cold potato along with the sour cream. Chop the spring onions and add to the potato, with the salt, pepper and worcestershire sauce.
   4. Spoon the potato filling into the potato skins, and lay each half on a baking tray so they fit snugly together. Sprinkle over the remaining cheese, giving each potato skin a light covering, and cook for 20-30 minutes until golden.
   5. Fry (or grill) the bacon rashers in oil until crispy, then crumble them and sprinkle half a rasher’s worth over each potato skin to make them fully loaded.

MAKE AHEAD TIP Fill the potato skins, as directed, and sprinkle with the cheese and crispy bacon (or add the crispy bacon after cooking if preferred). Cover loosely and keep in the fridge for up to 2 days. Cook as directed.

FREEZE AHEAD TIP Fill the potato skins as above, wrap in cling film and freeze for up to 1 week. To cook, lay the frozen potato skins on a baking sheet and cover loosely with foil. Cook in the oven for 35-40 minutes, removing the foil after the first 15 minutes.

Nigella Lawson's Chocolate Chip Chili — Unbelievably good and pretty easy

1lb Italian sausages  (hot!)
3lb 4oz shin of beef cut into three quarter inch cubes  (I used "stew meat")
1lb onions
3 cloves garlic
1 long red chili, seeded
1/4 cup vegetable or olive oil
3 cardamom pods
2 teaspoons ground cumin
1 teaspoon ground coriander
1 teaspoon ground cinnamon
1 teaspoon dried crushed chilis
1/4 cup tomato paste
1/4 cup tomato ketchup
2 (14oz) cans kidney beans
2 (14oz) cans black beans
3 (14oz) cans chopped tomatoes
1 tablespoon chili sauce (optional)
1/4 cup dark chocolate chips
1 cup water (swilled out in the chopped tomato cans)

Preheat the oven to 325F.

Finely chop, or process the onion, garlic and chili. Heat the oil in a large pan and fry this mixture until soft, add the cardamom seeds, cumin, coriander, cinnamon and dried chilis. Stir the oniony-spiced mixture together and then add the sausages sliced into eighth-inch coins.  (On TV, Nigella used sausage that wasn't in casings and she crumbled it into the pot and cooked it. That's what I did.)  Drop in the cubes of beef turning them in the pan with the sausages to brown the meat.  (It won't brown.)

Stir in the tomato paste, tomatoes, ketchup and drained kidney and black beans. Add the chili sauce and water and bring the chili to a boil, sprinkle over the chocolate and stir it all together. Season with salt, and once simmering cover the pan with a lid.

Put the chili in the oven and cook for 3 hours. Once cooked it is best left overnight as the flavor improves.

Serves 10-12

Vegetarians:  this chili can easily be made without meat.  Bake, peel and  cube up an acorn squash and add it to the chili for the flavor, texture and beautiful color.  Sweet potato or yam would also work.

Tuesday, October 19, 2010

A Question for You

Composition teachers think deeply about the comments we put on papers.  What is helpful?  What will students learn from?  What will they use?  What will they ignore?

Because grading and writing comments is so time intensive, these are not idle questions.  No comments at all is not the answer; receiving a paper back without a comment opens the question, "Did she even read this?"  On the other hand, if teachers spend too much time on each paper, then the papers on the bottom of the stack don't get a timely read.

I have read and returned only 6-8 papers, and I'm about to sit down and read for an hour.  My goal:  one or two comments per paper -- comments that will be helpful, and hopefully will help you to learn something new about your writing and how it is received by others. 

I'd love to hear back from you on this.  I think I will poll the class.

The Clasp, by Sharon Olds


The Clasp
by Sharon Olds

She was four, he was one, it was raining, we had colds,
we had been in the apartment two weeks straight,
I grabbed her to keep her from shoving him over on his
face, again, and when I had her wrist
in my grasp I compressed it, fiercely, for a couple
of seconds, to make an impression on her,
to hurt her, our beloved firstborn, I even almost
savored the stinging sensation of the squeezing,
the expression, into her, of my anger,
“Never, never, again,” the righteous
chant accompanying the clasp. It happened very
fast—grab, crush, crush,
crush, release—and at the first extra
force, she swung her head, as if checking
who this was, and looked at me,
and saw me—yes, this was her mom,
her mom was doing this. Her dark,
deeply open eyes took me
in, she knew me, in the shock of the moment
she learned me. This was her mother, one of the
two whom she most loved, the two
who loved her most, near the source of love
was this.

Meet bell hooks!

Her Wikipedia article.
A YouTube video of a lecture called "Cultural Criticism & Transformation."
Another YouTube video inspired by the work of bell hooks.
An publisher's biography.

How to mark a book, by Mortimer Adler

The best, most inspiring annotation advice I know of, AND it's written by a guy named Mortimer -- posted at the Radical Academy.  Three good reasons to take a look.

Monday, October 11, 2010

Wednesday, October 6, 2010

About the 5-Week Progress Report

Dear Parents of Seniors:

Sorry, but I did not enter grades for the seniors on this initial progress report.  Grades are very volatile right now with so much credit/no credit in the very early weeks (some kids have 125%), and one simple homework assignment on the books. If a student missed five points on that assignment, the grade dove to a low C- — I think you'll agree that such a severe drop in percentage due to 5 points is somewhat excessive.

I did test the seniors on reading comprehension, but we agreed that I would NOT enter that score as a grade since we are treating that as a baseline, a measure of where the kids were at that early moment in our time together, before instruction really got underway


I am in the middle of grading a test and their writer's notebooks, and seniors are working on a second draft of their first major paper, the personal statement.  All of this will shake out soon, but for tonight, when the 1st 5-week progress report is due, any grade I sent home on the progress report would either be far too high, or too low. 

According to my boss, I only have to send home a grade at this point if someone is in danger of failing.  So, no news is good news.

As always, contact me with any concerns.  I am diligently working on getting the kids' tests and notebooks graded.  The district writing assessment took place today in all five of my classes,  so I collected 175 essays today.  Keeping up with the kids' grading is the hardest part of my job.  The kids always say, "Quit assigning so much work!",  but that's not the answer.  We write all year long, and the load is heavy.  The only saving grace is your understanding and patience.

Alexandra Fletcher
afletcher@busd.k12.ca.us

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Tuesday, October 5, 2010

First Round Revision

Seek out the Killer Be's
am - is - are - was - were - be - been - being
and the Auxiliary (Linking) Verbs
can/could, shall/should, will/would, have-has-had-may-might-must

As I said in class, these are perfectly good words, but they often signal mushy language, mushy thinking.  Look for ways to recast the sentences where these words are lurking, and utilize stronger, active, visual, MUSCULAR verbs.

NOUNS
Use specific nouns!  Why say "tree" when you can say "sugarpine"?  Learn the names of the things in beautiful world around you, and quit writing like a caveman:  "I saw a big dog."


Dreck - yucky words
awesome - bad - cool - fine - good - great - happy - interesting - look - nice - really - said - so - very basically - seems like, sort of, kind of...you get the picture.  English teachers call these the "dead word" list.
Check out #9 on this page, Top Ten Mistakes in College Writing.


Please avoid cliches!

That's it for now.  If you just work on these small changes, your writing will improve!

Monday, October 4, 2010

Scholarships!

Ms. Burford forwarded me a PDF but I can't figure out how to post the link to the document out here.  Any advice?  This seems like a pretty basic technology move, but for some reason, I don't know how to do it. 

Anyway...it's a 48-page document entitled "Paying for College Student Resource Guide", and it includes descriptions and links to scholarships, internships, fellowships, resource books, and websites.  The information is provided to you by U.S. Congresswoman Lucille Roybal-Allard.

If I can't figure out how to post the link out here, we'll start an email list, and I'll just have my TA forward the document to you via email.

Saturday, October 2, 2010

Fall Writing Assessment

Seniors, we will be completing the District fall writing assessment on Wednesday, October 6. 

I like reading on-demand writing samples because I will see "raw" thinking and organizational skills.  It is a very good tool for me, as it enables me to get to know you as a writer pretty quickly -- especially because you are also in the middle of a process paper, and I am looking at notebooks.  All of these things tell me a little bit more about your skills and how you work.

Writing Notebooks #01

Working through the notebooks, period by period, 3x5=15 a day.  Fifty points available for full pages of writing.  I expect the first two days to be a little light, but hope to see better, fuller responses as the days progress. 

Our goal is to fill pages and increase fluency.  Quality is not the goal-->it's pure quantity.  I'm looking for you to get down somewhere around 250-375 words in the ten minutes alloted for this practice.  I am grading through the first 10 prompts, and looking for a short reflection on the syllabus review activity we did in class.  That reflection is worth 10 points. 

This first look is generous, meaning I'm giving points for pages, not word counts, and making only light comments. Topics are:
  1. Up All Night
  2. Brothers and Sisters
  3. Making a Difference
  4. Rebellion
  5. Describe the World you Come From
  6. "I Grew Up" (one visual detail)
  7. An Important Teacher (outside of school)
  8. Choice between 3:  
    1. If a million people do a foolish thing, it is still foolish.  What do you disagree with most people on?
    2. "Hell is other people." Jean-Paul Sartre "People who need people are the luckiest people in the world." Barbara Streisand  Who do you identify with and why?
    3. Here's an invention we could have done without.
  9. Three Virtues I Admire or Respect
  10. Five Things I Know for Sure
Beyond these prompts, I am looking for the syllabus reflection.

Also, I object vigorously to sharing notebook pages with any other subject.  Use the spiral notebook for ERW class only, please. 

Assignment: The Personal Statement

IMPORTANT DATES:  
  • Tues, October 5:  First draft, worth 20 points, is due in class.  No credit for late papers without an excused absence from a parent.
  • Fri, October 8:  We changed this deadline to accommodate Homecoming Hoopla.  The deadline for this second draft is now Tuesday, October 12:  Revised second draft with pseudonym, worth 30 points, due in class. 
  • Thur, October 14:  Final paper is due in class.

  • Monday
    Tuesday
    Wednesday
    Thursday
    Friday
    27
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    OK Seniors, it’s time to use the momentum we have created in three weeks of free-writing to write that personal statement.

    Goals & Objectives:
    • to experience and experiment with the Writing Process
    • to create a personal statement that you can use as the basis for future personal essays that may be required of you
    • to make all deadlines for Small Group Work and Blind Read Arounds
    • to learn to work in a Writer’s Workshop, offering and receiving feedback from classmates and from the teacher
    • to demonstrate skill and proficiency in writing through
      • a properly narrowed, controlling idea
      • supporting examples with singular, concrete detail
      • an appropriate sense of audience and rhetorical purpose;
      • minimal errors in grammar and punctuation;
      • a clear prose style appropriate to the assignment

    Specifics:
    • Your personal statement will be between 750-1000 words, double-spaced, 12pt. Times Roman with 1” margins.  Your paper will look like a picture in a frame.
    • Your heading on the first page will include your name, the title of this class and assignment (ERW: Personal Statement), and the date).  The heading will be single spaced and left justified. 
    • Skip two lines, and center a title on the page.  The title must be 12pt. Times Roman and in regular type: not underlined, not bold.  Good titles come from the content of the personal statement.  You absolutely, positively may NOT use “Personal Statement” as a title.
    • Subsequent pages will feature your first initial and last name, and the page number, left justified and 1” from the top.  (I will show you how to set this up.)
    • Please use the writing skills and techniques we will cover during class: use of concrete, sensory detail; correct usage of one semi-colon; correct comma usage in introductory phrases; one short sentence for emphasis.


    TOPICS FOR THE PERSONAL STATEMENT

    CHOICE A:  From the University of California

    1. Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.

    1. Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?

    CHOICE B:  Prompts from the Common Application (www.commonapp.org)
    1. Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you.
    2. Discuss some issue of personal, local, national, or international concern and its importance to you.
    3. Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you, and describe that influence.
    4. Describe a character in fiction, a historical figure, or a creative work (as in art, music, science, etc.) that has had an influence on you, and explain that influence.
    5. A range of academic interests, personal perspectives, and life experiences adds much to the educational mix. Given your personal background, describe an experience that illustrates what you would bring to the diversity in a college community, or an encounter that demonstrated the importance of diversity to you.
      1. Here is a link to a blogger who has this year's prompts.  This blog looks pretty interesting -- you may want to browse a little.  Beware of anyone who is trying to charge you money. 
    CHOICE C: 
    1. Your choice.  You may create your own prompt, use the prompt from the college of your choice, browse the University of Chicago prompts (one prompt that caught my attention this year:  "Find x"), or choose one of the “100 College Admission Essay Prompts" that I have in my red folder.  Here's a link to a site with prompts.
    ASSESSMENT:
    • The Personal Statement is worth 130 points, as follows:
    • Draft 1:  20 points – typed, in-class on the correct day, full participation in Small Group Work
    • Draft 2:  30 points – REVISED draft, typed, in-class on the correct day, full participation in Blind Read Around
    • Final Draft:  50 points, scored on a 6-Traits Rubric
    • Daily Participation:  30 points — 3 points a day divided randomly among the 15 days of the unit.  Everyone starts the day with 3 points; I dock points if I observe behavior that is off topic or distracting.

Thursday, September 16, 2010

Dear Parents: First 3 Weeks

The opening 3 weeks in ERW is meant to simply introduce students to the ways we work in this class, and the kinds of things we work on.  After the initial first three weeks of class, seniors in Mayfair's Expository Reading and Writing class have been exposed to the following learning activities:
  • freewriting -- a great way to increase writing fluency
  • annotation of texts -- an active reading technique where students write directly on text to track their understanding, their questions, the gaps in vocabulary, main ideas, interesting uses of language, evidence and support for arguments -- an essential college skill
  • independent free reading -- in addition to academic reading, it is our goal to establish a reading habit, born of pleasure and curiosity.  Students are encouraged to choose books that they will enjoy and we spend our short Mondays with our noses stuck in a book. 
  • minilessons -- short and potent lessons covering a singular aspect of either reading or writing
  • they say/I say -- a series of sentence templates that help students to master the rhetorical "moves that matter" in academic writing.  These are small sentence starters to assist students engage directly with the words of others, summarize and paraphrase important points, and to negotiate a position between 100% agreement and 100% disagreement
In addition, I've tested the class to establish a baseline in reading comprehension.  The test measures college-reading readiness, and covered the following explicit skills:
  • development and support
  • finding meaning in context
  • grammar, usage, and idiom
  • identifying important ideas
  • organization and coherence
  • reasoning from text
  • recognizing purpose and strategy
  • sentence control and clarity
  • understanding direct statements
After students took the test, they were able to review their tests to find what they got correct and what they missed, and most importantly, what skill was being tested on the questions they missed.  Students created a tally in each of the 9 areas, enabling them to see their own areas of strength and weakness. Among the 119 seniors that fill my 3 classes, scores ranged from 39/40 down to the low teens.

Finally, I polled my students by asking the following question:  Assuming nobody is "making you" read (like me), why do you read and what do you like to read? I am still compiling that data, so stay tuned here for some of their responses. 


That's it for now.  Keep checking back here from time to time.  I am going to do a better job this year of writing down what we are doing, and why we are doing it -- especially for these college bound seniors.

Next unit starts next Tuesday:  College Admission Essay Writing